Employees from one service contractor always tell the truth, and members of the other service contractor always lie. The SVP enters at the doorway of the venue and needs to know how to navigate to avoid the service contractor that will provide a very costly and high risk project. Of course, the SVP wants to choose the contractor that will allow the operator to plan a very efficient project that the operator company needs to be successful.
Happily, there are a few devices you can use to ensure you write the kind of fight scene that grips a reader from start to finish. Let the reader choreograph your fight scene.
In a Lit Reactor blog post several years ago, the author Chuck Palahniuk wrote about eliminating thought verbs from your writing. I know, it sounds crazy. I know, it sounds crazy. But as soon as I started to consider what he was saying, I knew it would be an interesting challenge and would probably help improve my writing. Chuck Palahniuk's Blog New Craft Essay - 'Consider This: Coping' When historians look back on our generation's most prolific writers of fiction, names like Stephen King, Elmore Leonard, and /5(K). But another name for that list is our own Chuck Palahniuk. Where I believe Chuck has those other names beat, is in the many different formats of writing he dips his toes into. Besides novels, Chuck has also dabbled in journalism, tour guides, and short stories.
This is their time to shine. Pace Intensifying the pace of your writing can communicate the immediacy and suddenness of conflict. Short, simple sentences keep the reader on their toes.
Fights happen quickly and your description needs to match that. In The Princess BrideWilliam Goldman writes a brilliant sword fightand perhaps the most enjoyable fight scene ever put on paper: The cliffs were very close behind him now.
Inigo continued to retreat; the man in black continued advancing. Then Inigo countered with the Thibault. And the man in black blocked it. Each sentence is short, the written equivalent of a sudden move.
Every time a new person takes an action in this passage, Goldman starts a new line, making the reader encounter each attack as a sudden, vital event. Hovering around the fight describing the actions of both characters sets a limitation on how gripping the experience can be.
The key is to thrust the reader into the thick of the actionand to do that they need to experience the fight through a character. McDonald mimics this experience for the reader by having longer passages between the single sentences of violence: Instead of looking who had pushed him, Fletch tried to save himself from falling.
Someone pushed him again.
He fell to the right, into the parade. A foot came up from the pavement and kicked him in the face. You can also write to match the perspective of the attacker: Verbs not adverbs Fight scenes demand brevity and adverbs are the opposite.
There are too many adverbs in your fight scene.
There are a few exceptions.Brilliant writing tips from the great Chuck Palahniuk, author of “Fight Club” and “Choke”. “Writing Advice: by Chuck Palahniuk In six seconds, you’ll hate me. Chuck Palahniuk himself should not be held accountable nor liable for any of the content posted on this website.
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